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| Slice of Life Challenge - Day 26 - Hosted by Two Writing Teachers |
The wind rushes past
Brushing all my cares to the side
The wind rushes past
I pump my legs harder
Until I can only see blue sky up ahead.
The wind rushes past
Shoving all my cares away
The wind rushes past
I trudge up the rungs and
Whoosh, down I go!
The wind rushes past
Spinning away my worries
The wind rushes past
Circling around but not landing
A flash of objects past my eyes.
The wind rushes past
My concerns vanish
The wind rushes past
It’s a playground day
A day of feeling free like the wind.
i feel the wind brushing,shoving and spinning away worries and I am experiencing the joy of a playground day. Refreshing!
ReplyDeleteI love the line, The wind rushes past-my concerns vanish. I get a real sense of freedom just reading it. I think my students feel like this when they run out of the door and onto the playground for recess. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI liked the repeating line and the carefree feeling the poem left behind.
ReplyDelete"shoving all my cares away" - I love it. Great images!
ReplyDeleteSo much movement, rushing wind. Your words bring the playground to life.
ReplyDeleteThis played like a movie in my head. Great imagery and detail.
ReplyDeleteAh-h, so nice & relaxing to run around outside playing. It must send some of those relaxing thoughts to the brain to feel the wind in one's hair & to rush down a slide. Nice!
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